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While reading my paper over firearms within our class, I realized I needed to make my opinion a more clean and less general. I had many awkward sentences- my goal is to have my paper flow a lot better. I have a lot of trouble with transition in all of my papers I write... it seems I jump around from topic to topic within it. I did write an outline for my firearms paper and that helped to get more of a frame around my work. I am going to start doing this for all of my work for better progress of transitioning and staying on topic.

From this class I have started writing a lot about many things outside of my school curriculum. Writing my beliefs, judgments, and opinions on... anything has become enjoyable for me.